Sunday, January 3, 2010

Another Word on Writing

Here are some thoughts on writing...but not my own. This is an excellent excerpt (or, more accurately, two excerpts) by Lewis Thomas - yes, that Lewis Thomas, so loved by Mr Robertson of AP Biology fame - on punctuation, from an essay fittingly called "Notes on Punctuation."

It is almost always a greater pleasure to come across a semicolon than a period. The period tells you that that is that; if you didn’t get all the meaning you wanted or expected, anyway you got all the writer intended to parcel out and now you have to move along. But with a semicolon there you get a pleasant little feeling of expectancy; there is more to come; to read on; it will get clearer.
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Exclamation points are the most irritating of all. Look! they say, look at what I just said! How amazing is my thought! It is like being forced to watch someone else’s small child jumping up and down crazily in the center of the living room shouting to attract attention. If a sentence really has something of importance to say, something quite remarkable, it doesn’t need a mark to point it out. And if it is really, after all, a banal sentence needing more zing, the exclamation point simply emphasizes its banality!


Read the whole thing if you're interested - it's not very long, but I find the ideas within continue to sift to the top of my head whenever I'm writing an essay (or other such drivel).

1 comment:

Connie R said...

Lewis Thomas has so very many wonderful quotes. Here's one of my favorites: "The great secret of doctors, known only to their wives, but still hidden from the public, is that most things get better by themselves; most things, in fact, are better in the morning."

Or how about this? "Music is the effort we make to explain to ourselves how our brains work. We listen to Bach transfixed because this is listening to a human mind."